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March 23, 2003

 

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Power Quotes for Business from WriteWorks Agency

March 23, 2003

 

Getting Mileage from this Quote:

·  Key Point

·  Marketing Value

·  In Speaking and Writing . . .

·  Beyond the Workplace . . .

·  And Your Favorite Quote?

·  Let WriteWorks Help

 

I know this week's quote may seem strange for business use at first glance, but — be assured — appearances can be deceiving.

It's not so much the specific words spoken in this week's quote, but what they represent that makes the quote a powerful tool for use in the business place. So, read on . . .

Ric Moxley – Managing Editor

That's one small step for man, one giant leap for mankind.

  Neil Armstrong

 

 

Key Point

In speaking these now-famous words as he stepped off the landing module and onto the moon July 20, 1969, Neil Armstrong used language to create a monument — a milestone. Consider the thousands upon thousands of human resource hours and millions upon millions of dollars spent getting those astronauts to the moon for the first time. But think for a moment; was that really NASA's goal? No — getting a man on the moon was just half of the goal. Getting him back to earth was certainly no less difficult or less important.

 

Neil Armstrong could have saved these words for their return to earth ("One small splash in the ocean for man..."). Instead, he commemorated the NASA crew's halfway point — reaching the moon. The moon landing itself was significant, not just because John F. Kennedy said America would do it first, but because humanity had achieved the impossible. Armstrong recognized that everyone back at NASA needed to pause and consider the significance of their individual efforts.

"But I am not flying to the moon anytime soon," you say. "How does Armstrong's quote apply to me in the workplace?"

As anyone in business management or leadership will experience, there is a danger hidden in the focus of energies required to tackle a project of gargantuan proportions. Project participants become locked into a kind of tunnel vision — a state of mind in which the nuts and bolts of the participant's duties become more important than the overarching mission of those duties. The result? Objectivity goes out the window. Individuals start squabbling, because, without a vision — without a conscious remembrance of the ends to which the project is the means — one's personal contributions become the reason. Everyone else's contributions become intrusions or competitive efforts. The team falls apart. The project may soon follow!

When you are starting a business, launching a new service or product, assembling a major proposal, reorganizing a business or team, engineering solutions to a daunting client problem; when you are taking on any challenging effort, what can you do to keep yourself and your team motivated? Brain drain or physical exhaustion will occur and can cause you or your team to lose willpower, unless you can do something to keep everyone focused on the objective. How?

Use Milestones — Create Monuments

A milestone, according to The American Heritage® Dictionary, is an important event; a turning point. But the dictionary also describes a milestone as, "A stone marker set up on a roadside to indicate the distance in miles from a given point." This is, of course, the literal definition. Remember the literal definition when you wish to commemorate that important event or turning point — make the milestone event significant by creating a tangible marker: a monument. And don't wait until you complete the project — create memorable milestones along the way to generate enthusiasm and purpose. That is precisely what Neil Armstrong did with those monumental words.

Webster's Dictionary describes a monument as something which stands, or remains, to keep in remembrance what is past. Wise leaders recognize and seize opportunities to create monuments. It can be a physical thing, or it can be as simple as a defining verbalization — something which they or others will remember beyond the moment. In the tradition of many civilizations, a monument would often be a pile of rocks which, on an otherwise barren landscape, revived the significance of what happen in this spot whenever the monument was seen. A modern-day version of this: what do most of us do after reaching a major weight loss or muscle-building goal? We take a picture! That is our visual reminder of what we achieved — a reminder of what we don't want to lose.

Neil Armstrong created something as tangible and enduring as a stone monument when he stepped onto the moon and spoke that tiny little sentence. Just words? Yes, but never underestimate the power of words to make a lasting impression. Imagine being one of the crew members or engineers back at NASA, watching and listening to this historic event unfolding. When Armstrong spoke those words, what a tremendous sense of pride must have swelled up in their chests! So many lines of computer code, so many bolts riveted: but this is what it was all about.

Now, they could never forget.

 

 

Marketing Value

How do you sell something ugly? War, for instance? Whether you are for or against specific decisions of entering a war, humanity is of one accord in that we'd rather avoid it. How is Bush marketing the war? By turning the focus from the unavoidable horror and devastation of war to the higher calling of noble objectives. He speaks about freeing a people from tyranny; about preventing another 9/11 event. Then, to soldiers and to civilians who accept these aims, any bloodshed can be justified by the nobler objectives.

Is this promotional technique new? Hardly. But effective? Look at the historical evidence. Why did Nathan Hale say, "I regret that I have but one life to give for my country," instead of, "Somebody get me out of here!"? I suspect he knew that the words he chose would not only instill personal bravery, but also inspire his compatriots, spurring them on.

Lincoln used similar motivations in his famous speech at Gettysburg, following one of the bloodiest battles in history. He said, "We cannot consecrate . . . this ground. The brave men, living and dead, who struggled here, have consecrated it, far above our poor power to add or detract. The world will little note, nor long remember, what we say here, but it can never forget what they did here."

At this point in his address, Lincoln has turned the seemingly senseless shedding of blood into a noble sacrifice for a great cause. His words have dutifully humbled his audience. They see their relative insignificance to that of those who died here. Lincoln then turns the battle of Gettysburg into a milestone that serves to move people beyond the sadness of death and onto the unfinished task ahead: "It is for us the living, rather, to be dedicated here . . . to the great task remaining before us . . . increased devotion to that cause for which they gave the last full measure of devotion."

These were convicting words, rallying those listening to what they must now do. But did he consider those words sufficient to spur on his listeners to action? No — Lincoln also needed to burn their conscience with words that would give them strength during the difficult times they surely would experience. To do this, he added these galvanizing words of noble purpose: "We resolve that these dead shall not have died in vain . . . that government of the people, by the people, for the people, shall not perish from the earth." (Click here get the full text of his Gettysburg address, or click here to view Lincoln’s handwritten original notes from the speech)

When you must motivate yourself or others to action when faced with an unpopular task, learn from Nathan Hale and Abraham Lincoln; turn the focus away from the arduous journey. Turn the focus toward the nobility of the objective.  

 

 

In Speaking and Writing . . .

The easiest way for leaders to commemorate significant progress effectively is to plan for it. Analyze the project before it begins, looking for milestone opportunities that are likely to arise. Write down the significant steps and milestones, then plan now how you will commemorate those moments when they arrive. Some ideas:

·    Have a champagne toast. Mention the specific accomplishments of individuals that made this milestone possible.

·    Find a famous quotation suitable to the achievements at hand. Or, create a memorable quotation that's right for the moment. Memorize the quote you plan to speak, then create a focused event — a dramatic pause in the flow of the project — to help the team gather perspective.

·    Give the group a gift. Consider having a masseuse drop in and spend a few moments with each team member. I assure you — that will never be forgotten! Consider giving a tangible gift to the team — something that stays in the work area, such as a water cooler, a boom box, or a trophy. Make sure there is a plaque attached to the gift, forever reminding them that the gift commemorated the achievements that their individual efforts made possible. Matching T- shirts or caps with some well-chosen words can do this as well. When you present the gift, let them know why you are doing this — that you recognize the many individual achievements and their significance to the overall accomplishments of the team.

·    Take the team to a movie, or rent one. This milestone technique is particularly effective if you choose a movie relevant to the team's accomplishments. For example, there are plenty of movies that demonstrate success through teamwork when facing overwhelming odds, such as Apollo 13, Places in the Heart, or Saving Private Ryan. When the movie has stopped, compare the significance of what the team is working on to what they just saw in movie. This will make a lasting impression, motivating the team onward with gusto.

·    If time doesn't allow a complete movie break, pick a key scene or two from the movie. You will still be creating a memorable event and achieving the same results.

Don't always resort to spending money. Well-chosen words can be the most powerful monuments. The phrase "Remember the Alamo!" did more to encourage the troops to win Texas from Mexico than any "Go, team, go!" T-shirts could do. The words "One small step for man . . ." were ultimately more valuable to NASA than any happy hour bash. Spend thought first, money second.

 

 

 

Beyond the Workplace . . .

Stephen Covey talks about the basic human needs being the need to live, to love, to learn, and to leave a legacy. We won't go into those in detail here (you can read about it in his book First Things First: To Live, to Love, to Learn, to Leave a Legacy). But, as a leader of a business or of a family, it's worth remembering these human needs. An effective leader seeks ways to assure that a person feels valued — that what they do has value — by meeting these needs.

When faced with a major challenge, creating monuments or milestones will touch some of these human needs, restoring purpose in the drudgery or sweat of the work at hand. It may not be fun to mow the lawn, even less so for a teen to trouble themselves with the effort of doing the job well. Can you appeal to a higher purpose using milestones or monuments? Certainly! For example:

·         Make sure your teen hears about it when a neighbor says something complementary about your lawn.

·         Point out moments of excellence in your teen's lawn work to encourage consistent excellence in the future ("You sure have a knack for keeping your lines straight," or, "Look how nicely you've trimmed around this fence!").

·         Commemorate an advance in quality by taking him out to dinner to celebrate.

·         Remind him that excellence is a sign of maturity. All teenagers long to be thought of as mature, so you are then appealing to your teen’s nobler motives.

Milestones and monuments in business or in the home serve to commemorate significant achievements. Do not just use them to recognize those who deserve merit, but to remind all team or family members that they are each contributing to something great.

 

 

What is Your Favorite Quote?

Do you have a favorite quote that has either served you inspirationally in the workplace or has been a nice bit of spice in speech or in writing? Write and tell us about it. We may feature your quote in a future issue to inspire others.

 

 

Let WriteWorks Help

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