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Words that Sell . . . ARE CONSISTENT

 December 31, 2002

 

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The Words that Sell series explores the power tools of persuasive language, providing insight on using these tools effectively.

In this issue, we put consistency under the microscope, analyzing its significance in the world of verbal persuasion, and reveal how to harness its power. In the marketer’s or salesperson’s toolbox, consistency is a fundamental power tool of communication. To master this tool is to deliver a perception of reliability and professionalism. To overlook it is damage your credibility.

 

Let me ask you to picture yourself in a crowded room at a business gathering. A man you’ve never met walks in, wearing a well-pressed, custom-fit, dark blue suit, white shirt, and a conservative, burgundy tie. Immediately — before you know anything else about him — you subconsciously, or perhaps even consciously, form opinions about him. Many studies have shown that the effect, among nearly all classes of people and regions of the country, is a positive one.

 

Now imagine that same man in the same suit unbuttoning his jacket and revealing a tattered yellow belt with an oversized buckle that sports a marijuana leaf emblem. As he moves toward you through the crowd, you see for the first time that the suit is about three inches too short and that he is wearing high-heeled pumps: ruby red, let’s say.

 

What has happened to your opinion of the man? It cannot help but change! He is the same man, of course, with or without the suit, isn’t he? Not to you, he isn’t. Because, as anyone in marketing or sales learns early on, perception is reality; as far as the customer is concerned, you are precisely what you appear to be. Why is it then that companies permit equally glaring inconsistencies in their public presentation?

 

In this Words that Sell article, we reveal how to establish consistency in presentation and delivery of your communications, including how to create the ground rules for others to follow, how to locate and use reliable standards as the basis for your rules, and how to create procedures for assuring ongoing quality control.

 

Consistent Presentation

 

Nothing damages an image of professionalism quite like inconsistencies in the presentation of its words: how its documents are presented, whether for promotional purposes, instruction, announcements, or customer support. Presentation of your message includes aspects such as the typestyle, the size of the words, the layout of the page and document, the tone of the language, and more.

 

The most conspicuous mistake to make when presenting your words is to have inconsistencies within the same document or format, such as on your Web site, in your brochures or newsletters, and so forth. At the least, it signals poor planning and sloppiness (not unlike the businessman’s bizarre attire in our example above). At worst, it delivers a perception of strife or disharmony within your organization.

 

Not as obvious, but of equal importance, is to present your company consistently across your various formats. If the tone of your dialogue is bold and daring in your brochures, yet calculating and conservative on your Web site, yet again ambling and flowery in your newsletters, you are damaging their view of your company as organized, efficient, professional, and trustworthy.

 

Seek consistency in all manner and all arenas of presentation, from design and layout to tone and style of your wording. Here are some tips to make consistent communications a natural process within your company.

 

Set up Ground Rules

 

Obviously, such things as grammar, punctuation, style, voice, and spelling should be correct. But what defines “accurate” or “correct” usage? The English language has evolved over the years, over miles, and over venues such that there are many published derivations followed to define correct usage. For example, let's look at the ellipsis — the three periods in a row, used to imply a trail-off of thoughts, or to imply missing sections within a quote. Which of the following would you say is the correct use of the ellipsis?

1.       "I don't know... do you?" she asked.

2.       "I don't know ... do you?" she asked.

3.       "I don't know . . . do you?" she asked.

 

The answer is: all three are correct, depending on which style guidebook you refer to for your answer. Should there be spaces between the periods, or not? Should the periods that make up the ellipsis be attached to the leading word, or not? What about to the trailing punctuation? Different rulebooks give you different answers. Likewise, consider the use of commas in a series. Which of these do you feel is correct?

1.       "We provide value, convenience, and quality.”

2.       “We provide value, convenience and quality.”

 

Some guidebooks tell you to place a comma after each item in the list. Other was tell you to place a comma after each item except the last one, as shown in the second sentence above. Even the use or spelling of certain words or terms in the English language can vary depending on your source! For example, is it web or Web? Web site or website? Email (capitalized) or email (not capitalized) or e-mail (hyphenated) or E-Mail (capitalized and hyphenated)?

 

The correct answer is always the same, however: consistency. You must be consistent in your application of words and language, and you must use an acceptable set of standards. How do you go about this?

 

Establish a Company Style Guide

 

A corporate style guide is a book or document set up by a company to set the rules for consistent use across all forms of communication, whether inside or outside the organization. For some companies, there are separate guides created for design and branding vs. wording. Others compile them into one guidebook. For some companies, the style guide may need to be a 200-page manual or even more. For others, a startup company for example, the style guide can be as short as a single paragraph that simply refers to a specific, published style manual and dictionary in order to define the company's rules. But the important thing is to have one. For more information on why and how to have one, refer to the article further in this issue: Why You Need a Company Style Guide.

 

Base Your Ground Rules on Reliable Standards

 

If you need a standard on which to define your company's rules for copy, consider basing it on one of the recognized standards (click on any title to purchase the book from Amazon.com):

§         The Chicago Manual of Style

§         Associated Press Stylebook and Libel Manual

§         The Elements of Style

§         MLA Style Manual

 

While consistency is important, a recognized standard must be at the base of it. Your company’s style guide will go beyond the published standard to create rules for the use of words and phrases that are unique to your company, but base it on something recognized. Doing so also makes it easier to outsource copywriting, proofreading, or copyediting services, or to bring on new writers as your company grows. Professional writers are familiar with these well-known guides and can quickly adapt to your unique communication requirements if the foundation is a recognized standard.

 

Choose a Dictionary to Follow As Well

 

Incredibly, even the correct spelling of a word can differ between one dictionary and another. For example, the word is "verbiage" in most dictionaries, yet is spelled "verbage" in another. Is it “demeanor” or “demeanour?” “Ax” or “axe?”

 

The definition or usage of the word can change as well. Some dictionaries give two definitions for the word verbiage; one with negative connotations (as in: the overabundance or excess use of words) and another definition with neutral connotations (as in: documentation, or the manner in which something is expressed). Other dictionaries however give it no negative definition at all. Confusing? It gets worse; let’s say you need to know its pronunciation for a speech. Some dictionaries say that verbiage is a two-syllable word, others say three! You may be astounded to know how many variations like this exist in the English language.

 

Why the confusion? The differences are caused by language migration, devolution, and revolution. To understand the impact of migration — how spelling has changed as the language was carried to new regions of the world — look at www.bartleby.com/185/31.html. Over the ages, spelling has also changed due to devolution (the opposite or evolution), becoming simpler. Redundant letters and those viewed as unnecessary have been dropped. Revolution of the language refers to words and language that have changed by popular demand and use. For example, published nonfiction books today, particularly those that target a younger audience, have used the term “gotta” instead of “got to.” It is even officially a word now, if you have determined that (a.) it fits the tone of your company’s language and (b.) you have declared that the fourth edition of the American Heritage® Dictionary is your standard for arbitration of word usage.

 

So, when creating a company style guide, clear up any confusion; mandate a specific dictionary to be your word referee. Then add a “voice and tone” section to your guide, to control the acceptability of words and terms. Just because a dictionary may permit the choice of “gotta” in a sentence doesn’t mean that it fits your style of communications.

 

Establish Quality Control Procedures

 

Structure your business for consistency in communicating by filtering all critical documents through a single, reliable wordsmith before they go out. Whether you outsource this service to an individual or to a company such as WriteWorks, or have an internal “word cop” assuring the quality before your name goes out in print or in a script, make sure it is being done by someone. Providing this rule, and specifying under what circumstances it is optional, assures a consistency in your communications. Sometimes this service is handled by a Corporate Communications department. Other times, your word proofreading cop may be in Marketing, Content Services, or handled by your advertising or Web agency. Smaller companies in particular may need to outsource such copyediting and proofreading services.

 

Words that Sell are Consistent

 

While it is true that Mark Twain once said, "Never trust a man that spells a word the same way twice," let us remember that he was a humorist. Mark Twain would not argue with this; be consistent to be correct. If you punctuate in one manner here yet in another manner there, you will be unequivocally  — and blatantly  — incorrect. To be consistent, make and use a style guide. Choose a particular dictionary as part of that guide, and refer to it alone for correct word use. Make the style guide available to employees and anyone else supporting your business (partners, affiliates, vendor companies, contractors) that presents or represents your business in words.

 

Contact us for guidance or support in developing communications standards for your company.

 

 

 

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